Here's the next installment in the first chapter of Vargrom: Modrad's Exile.
Chapter One
“Modrad,” a muffled voice called
out.
The dwarf thought it was a dream,
but the pain felt real enough. Putting a hand to his head, Modrad rolled onto
his back, letting out a groan. He felt the unforgiving wood beneath him, the
noticeable discomfort still no match for the throbbing inside his skull. Modrad
lifted his eyelids, but the intruding light of a nearby lantern forced them
closed again.
“Modrad!” The visitor put fist to
door this time.
His eyes shot open but not because
of the banging. Something moved up through his throat, demanding to be
released. Modrad quickly turned over and got to his knees. The dwarf vomited,
the contents spattering the floor. Modrad never did make it to bed after
arriving home from the tavern. That much had become certain.
A dwarf rarely needed incentive to
drink, but the prior day’s events begged to be washed away, so Modrad had taken
on that challenge with a vengeance. Somewhat relieved, he managed to get his
feet under him, though he stood with a clear lack of confidence. Another bout
of door pounding ensued.
“Enough already,” Modrad rumbled.
Brushing past a clothes line, he
made his way to the front of the house. Modrad grabbed a lantern, which hung
along one of the walls, and opened the door. A male, one old enough to be his
father, stared back at him.
“Onoir Lightfoot?”
“I know,” Onoir said. “It’s been too
long.”
Modrad gasped. “Not long enough if
you ask me.” He turned his back to Onoir and walked toward the fireplace.
“May I come in?”
“You might as well,” Modrad replied,
snatching a stool and taking a seat. “You’ll only wake everyone by staying out
there, and I have enough problems to deal with.”
Onoir entered, gently closing the
door behind him, the elder’s face becoming more apparent in the light. Heavy
wrinkles weighed the skin beneath his beady, blue eyes, and Onoir’s once
youthful beard, shaven only at the chin, had turned a whitish gray. He even
required a wooden staff to help him walk.
“Why are you here?”
“I have news.”
Great writing, Kevin. Hope it's a hit! Congrats!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susan.
DeleteI haven't read fantasy for a long time. Not since I finished The Ranger's Apprentice series, but this has me intrigued. Thanks for reviving my interest.
ReplyDeleteI haven't read fantasy for a long time. Not since I finished The Ranger's Apprentice series, but this has me intrigued. Thanks for reviving my interest.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great series.
DeleteYou left us with a cliffhanger there.What is the news? Good or bad?:)
ReplyDeleteHa-ha. I did that intentionally, Beverly. Guess you'll have to find out in the next installment, which will come Monday. :)
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