Friday, January 29, 2016

The next installment of Vargrom: Modrad's Exile



Here's the next installment in the first chapter of Vargrom: Modrad's Exile. 

Chapter One

            “Modrad,” a muffled voice called out.
            The dwarf thought it was a dream, but the pain felt real enough. Putting a hand to his head, Modrad rolled onto his back, letting out a groan. He felt the unforgiving wood beneath him, the noticeable discomfort still no match for the throbbing inside his skull. Modrad lifted his eyelids, but the intruding light of a nearby lantern forced them closed again.
            “Modrad!” The visitor put fist to door this time.
            His eyes shot open but not because of the banging. Something moved up through his throat, demanding to be released. Modrad quickly turned over and got to his knees. The dwarf vomited, the contents spattering the floor. Modrad never did make it to bed after arriving home from the tavern. That much had become certain.
            A dwarf rarely needed incentive to drink, but the prior day’s events begged to be washed away, so Modrad had taken on that challenge with a vengeance. Somewhat relieved, he managed to get his feet under him, though he stood with a clear lack of confidence. Another bout of door pounding ensued.
            “Enough already,” Modrad rumbled.
            Brushing past a clothes line, he made his way to the front of the house. Modrad grabbed a lantern, which hung along one of the walls, and opened the door. A male, one old enough to be his father, stared back at him.
            “Onoir Lightfoot?”
            “I know,” Onoir said. “It’s been too long.”
            Modrad gasped. “Not long enough if you ask me.” He turned his back to Onoir and walked toward the fireplace.
            “May I come in?”
            “You might as well,” Modrad replied, snatching a stool and taking a seat. “You’ll only wake everyone by staying out there, and I have enough problems to deal with.”
            Onoir entered, gently closing the door behind him, the elder’s face becoming more apparent in the light. Heavy wrinkles weighed the skin beneath his beady, blue eyes, and Onoir’s once youthful beard, shaven only at the chin, had turned a whitish gray. He even required a wooden staff to help him walk.
            “Why are you here?”
            “I have news.”

7 comments:

  1. Great writing, Kevin. Hope it's a hit! Congrats!

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  2. I haven't read fantasy for a long time. Not since I finished The Ranger's Apprentice series, but this has me intrigued. Thanks for reviving my interest.

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  3. I haven't read fantasy for a long time. Not since I finished The Ranger's Apprentice series, but this has me intrigued. Thanks for reviving my interest.

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  4. You left us with a cliffhanger there.What is the news? Good or bad?:)

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    1. Ha-ha. I did that intentionally, Beverly. Guess you'll have to find out in the next installment, which will come Monday. :)

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